假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10 处，多者(从11 处起) 不计分。

    Believe it or not, many of the biggest change in how English is spoken have come from common people in the streets. And one of the most important places which English has changed is the playground! These playgrounds can be any place where the young people meet, such like a sports field or a beach. Often words using by black kids in big cities become popular for other kids many years later. On the beaches of southern California, teenagers invented words to describe what they felt when they surfed. These words found its way into the high schools and then to other places. Similar changes happen among young people in Ireland and Australia. Children from one group would find ways to play with another group more easily. Often they made new words just develop an identity different from their parents.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Hello, everyone! I'm honored to share with you my opinion on “smile”.

    Hard although life as, I want to smile whenever and wherever possibly.

    First, I would like to smile at my parents for giving me life and providing which I need to bring me up. Beside, I would like to say “thank you” to my teachers with a smile as well as. With their help, I have made great progresses. Then my smile should go to me. Only in this way I gain more confidence in smile my difficulties away and live a better life.

    In the word, let's greet every day with a smile.

    That's all. Thank you!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Alice, my closest friend, devotes many energy to her lessons all day long. She is always one of the top student in our class. She loves the music so much that she made it a rule to enjoy some pop songs in her spare time. Alice is always willing to help other, and she often helps us with our lessons. As an enthusiastic volunteer, she has successful organized varieties of voluntary activities. We paid visit to a nursing home last month, so we picked up rubbish near our school. That we did was warmly welcomed by the staff in the home. Win honour for our school, Alice is admired by our classmates.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mr. Grey liked walking from a station to his office. One morning he was walking along the street while a stranger stopped him and said to him, “You may not remember me, sir, but one year before I came to London without a penny in my pocket. I stopped you in this street and asked you lend me some money, but you gave me £5. You said you are willing to take a chance to give us a new start.” Mr. Grey felt a bit surprising and thought for a few second. Then he said, “Yes, I remember you.” “Well, are you willing to take for another chance?” The stranger said carefully.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was Sunday yesterday. I didn't need go to school. So together with my friend, I went on a picnic. Carrying a bag of food, we set it out. The sky was blue but the air was fresh to breathe. We were very excited. All of the sudden, I felt my bike became very heavy. I realize there must have been something wrong with it. Sure enough, one of the tires got flatter. I had no choice but to walk. However, with two friends around me, I didn't feel disappointed. Late, a truck driver volunteered to get my bike repair. I was really lucky to meet such kind a man.

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线(—)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

On a sunny day last month, I was visiting Summer Palace when I came across a little girl standing alone with tear streaming down her face. I walked up to her and offered to help. Thankful, she calmed down and told me what had been happened. She came here to do some sightseeing with her parents and they got separated. Immediately I take her to the broadcasting station. Before hearing the news, her parents rushed here. The girl couldn't wait to run towards him. The couple thanked me warmly, expressing their thanks for my kind help. Seen the family disappear into the distant, I felt very happy.