假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jim，

    I'd like to invite you for dinner in a Chinese restaurant in Los Angeles．I can imagine how surprising you are! In fact，I am there visiting my uncle，who happened to be working in the city at present．

    The Chinese restaurant naming New Panda Buffet provides genuine Chinese food，where many diners have given 5-star reviews．It is located at 5120 Rodeo Rd，Los Angeles．Could you come at 6 p.m. on Friday?

    By the way, I will present you with a go set then．I really appreciate that you have done to help me with my English during the past two years．But you，I would not have made such a great progress in English．

    Looking forward to you early reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Some phones had become part of our daily life. No matter who we are, we can see people busy play with their smart phones. Smart phones benefit them. They help us escape the pressure of life and get informations. However, if we spend too much time on them, we won't have time to contact face to face our friends and family. And our life, study and work will hurt. In my view, we should limit to our using smart phones except for a purpose of learning. Meanwhile, it's absolute necessary for us to take part in more outdoors activities.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I can clear remember the incident that was happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing while a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car. The car drove off quickly, and a man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid. I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to nearest hospital.

    My experience show that it is not difficult to be a responsible member of the societies. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of how I did.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mobile payment is very popular in China, that has made people's daily life more and more convenience. Most people are used to pay by scanning QR codes. By mobile payment, you can pay easy wherever you go. You can buy breakfast on the street and pay by scanning with you smart phone. However, in the subway station, you scan with your smart phone buy your ticket. Mobile payment is popular to most Chinese people, allowing us to say goodbye to wallets and bank cards. So it has greatly been changed people's lives in China. It seemed that China is really leading in some ways and is also sweeping other nations.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone's surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删减：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Monday, our class hold a speech contest on the theme of thankfulness. Both of us took an active part in it because we were interesting in it. In beginning, our teacher made a speech, appeal to us to be thankful. After that, many participants impressed us on their wonderful performances. They expressed their love and appreciations to their parents, teachers and people who love them. I learned a lot of from this activity. There are many people around us who have helped us great. We should be grateful to them in return for which they have done for us.